Alligator Pie

Spoilers to get the Pie Ending!

Damn, this was quite heart breaking... The grief that Trisha went through was so obvious meanwhile Dani had to hold it in together. I can't imagine the pain he had to go through... Not only that, but the actions Trisha did had no excuse. But then again, to grieve is truly an ugly and painful thing to do... I just have to say that the art is superb, I love the expressions that were shown and how visceral they all feel, and the fact that you can see the mental deterioration that Trisha is going through so clearly is quite disturbing.

It's a wonderful sad tale, at the very least in the Pie Ending, while MC couldn't get in their dream job Trisha was finally stable enough. I do hope we do see an epilogue about what happened to MC and Trisha and Dani since MC suffered a lot.

Also, to get the Pie Ending is here!!!

Basically, you just need to be agreeable to Trisha. You need to agree and do what she says so she becomes attached to you and genuinely cares for you, but it's twisted in her grief. The scores you see are the choices you made.

Here is a more detailed one:

> I think we can fix it.

> Yeah we can work on that now.

> Fine.

> If you say so.

And there you have it, the ending with Okay or No doesn't really matter when you have no choice there. Hope this helps and this was quite a lovely gut wrenching visual novel! Spooky that's for sure, god I was terrified of the expressions and sound effects.

The art is incredible

I was both equally sad and creeped out while playing this. I’ve never seen something like this done before so I enjoyed the creativity! 

una historia completamente impactante, la música y la ambientación desoladora ayudan muchísimo a la estructura argumental del juego, simplemente un gran trabajo. 

i feel like it would be better *if we had a chance at actually saving ourselves other than being vulnerable*

This was a very creepy game, but it was very good!

This game was so creepy and twisted...I LOVED IT

What a great game. I liked the art, that's what got my interest in the first place. So unique and...creepy. I think the art really fits the theme.

Here's my little take on this game. No facecam or commentary and I broke my playthrough into parts and here's the first part:

The art style of the game drew me in and I thought I'd give it a try. The art is amazing! The manic expressions were well done and they definitely conveyed the horror theme well. For a first game, it's nicely executed! I especially love the monochrome. As a renpy user myself who's trying to get the hang of things, I thought I'd give a few tips for your future projects. First off, I noticed that the sprites change sizes between expressions. I found that an easy way to keep this from happening is to keep your canvas size consistent when drawing. I found about 720 pixels high seems to work best. Also, if you go into the game files and select the one titled 'GUI' you can change all sorts of things about the game, like the textbox and the choice buttons by replacing the preset images with your own. First projects are hard, (Believe me I know, I'm still working on mine) so it's such an amazing accomplishment to complete one! Keep up the good work! :)

nice drawns

Video: 

I was eyeing this game for a while and when I finally played I was blown away! First of all, I loved the art style and the story was so good. At one point I stopped commentating and became so immersed in the plot. I can't wait to see more for Junnii, the developer! I'm now a fan!

This was really fun to play and I LOVED the art and story I'll definitely be playing it again

This was a very well written and creepy game. Keep up the great work! 

Fun game!

Oh my lord this was creepy but I loved it. Congrats!

I love the mix of realism and just pure horror. Made me super uncomfy, definitely gonna replay it often just for how good the story is.

I loved this, so twisted!

You did such a great job at creating an immersive and VERY unsettling environment. I’ve gotta say it definitely felt like a short, horror visual novel where the difference between motherly love and twisted obsession is only one bad choice away.

Ohvgosh, it was good

this is this the best video game ever! and I should know I've played every video game ever!!

This was a depressing visual novel about the mental turmoil that a grieving mother and father has to face. When being put into the shoes of the main character, how would you make decisions in the face of the mother despite knowing what it could possibly lead to is a moral dilemma throughout the game. I did manage to get the Pie ending and was glad that I kept trusting Trisha even though she kept on letting the main character down.

The game uses music, sound effects and the storyline effectively, to grab the players attention and allows players to understand the emotions revolving around each part of the game. The shaky words and amazing visual art added on to the horror and how stressful the situations are in the game and I really enjoyed the game overall.

Would be good if some of the gory parts of the story was actually drawn out XD. It would add on to the horrifying and stressful atmosphere that the game has brought out.

Thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.

love it thank you